Task 8 "Chase" text

1) The woman 

2) The woman

3) Fear - Negative

Terror - Negative 

Excitement - Positive

Triumph - Positive

Worry - negative 

4) She felt triumphant

5) "She already was trouble" she knew who he was

6) To see much better, because they were searching and it helps

7) On the tower, hiding 

8) Because she had been tu niña

10) Because she Will be noticed

11) Because she broke it 

12) Relaxed, Loosened - Smoothly

Wide apart - Wide rear

Varied - diverse

Complicated - complex

Related - associated

Asked for - commited 

13) Because he is wearing ear sets

14) Ear sets

15) Present, because of reasons 

16) Mystery, probably a spy

17) Narrator, is the coolest one

18) Death

Animal Farm Speech

Fellow animals and friends

We are conscious of what's happening in the farm, so it's time to put an end to it! Napoleon took the power and now we are doing the things he say, his slaves. So,what are we waitinf for?

Not long ago we were living happily in the farm, defending animalism. But all things has a limit, and Napoleong already passed that limit and there is no way back for him, sadly. We perfectly knew Boxer, right? He's no longer with us because of him! And what about Snowball, our friend? Napoleong ordered to expell him from the farm. Maybe some of you think different, but you must understand that Napoleon washed your brains! The Old Major wanted for us to be equal, to be finally free of humans, but in the end, Napoleon is just like them. He started to act like them, to drink alcohol with them, is he really our leader? Think about farmer Jones. He treated us really bad, and he deserved the punishment of his own medicine. But Napoleon has done the same things, even worst things. He killed our mates! Why nobody can sleep in comfortable beds except for him? What about the windmill? We all worked really hard to achieve Napoleon's aim, be he just stood there and forced us without stopping. In addition, when the windmill exploded, he ordered to re-build it, and again we worked unhappily and tired. 

But now, my friends, it's time to react. We will go all together and confront Napolon for all those things he had done. Or we'll still obbey his orders and live in this dominated farm? Let's fulfill our whish!

( N of words: 280 )

Written Task Corrected Kite Runner

September 4th, 1975

Dear Baba,

I'm writing to you because Ali asked me to. I'm a friend of his, so I'm writing the letter because, as you know, he's illiterate. He wanted to write to you so much, he reallly wanted to explain why, after 40 years, suddenly decided to leave the house along with Hassan. So I will concede his wish.

It has been 40 years, in which we treated each other as brothers. I'll never forget that moment, as a child, when your father finally adopted me, those years where I grew up with you. Making silly things, the mischief you and I used to cause. I know you got confused when I told you that both of us were leaving the house, because Hassan told me everything.

I'm sure you remember exactly the kite tournament, Amir cutting the last kite, Hassan said it as a bright blue one, a cool one. So when the kite started falling down, you were so happy and distracted that you didn't realize Hassan wennt straight away to the place were the kite was supposed to land.

So he went alone, he ran through the paths and ended in a cold alley near the bazaar, and he actually found the kite - you know Hassan never fails at it -. But his happiness of finding the kite lasted only  a few seconds.
Assef knew about the kite tournament, so he waited, together with Wally and Kamal, to be ended so he could talk to him about their unfinished business. But, while they where waiting near the bazaar, they saw a boy running through the alleys, It was Hassan. And in that moment Assef remembered how rude he was when they met together with Amir, so Assef and the other two guys started chasing him.
So when Hassan finally found the blue kite (the one that I mentioned before), he turned back and found Assef and the other two. Assef asked nicely if Hassan could let them the kite he was holding in his hands. But, the worst thing is the person who was also there, hiding behind a corner: Amir.

So Assef told Hassan to give him the kite so he "would forgive him for his rudeness". And of course, he said no. So Assef proceeded to insult my "stupid hazara boy". So Assef decided to let him keep the kite, but you know nothing is free in this world. Assef final words were "I'll let you keep the kite. I'll let you keep the kite so it will always remind you of what I'm about to do": he raped Hassan.

He raped him with no compassion. You know Amir was there, right? Well, he could just step into the alley and stand up for all the time Hassan did it for him in the past, and I'm sure you think the same thing, or he could have run. While Hassan was with his face towards the cold wall, he remember seeing a boy coming out of the alley and running alone.

It maybe be surprising for you,but the reason Amir hid his watch and the bills under Hassan's pillow was because he felt so guilty that he only wanted no longer to see Hassan again. That's why I decided to leave the house, so I ask you a favor. Don't ever think I forgot those 40 years, because I haven't done it.

I hope you both take care,

Best wishes,

Ali.

(N° of words: 575)

Written Asignment Kite Runner Rationale Corrected

Rationale

The Kite Runner tells a story of fierce cruelty and redeeming love between Amir, a young afghan boy, and the main characters. specially Hassan, a loyal hazara kid, a friend of Amir. Both loved to fly kites, until something happens that breaks with their fondness for the game.

The letter that I'm going to write explains the reason of why Amir and Hassan stopped seeing each other, just as Baba stopped seeing Ali in a specific event inside the story.

I will mention how Ali tells Baba about Hassan's rape through an emotional letter. In addition, the 40 year-relation between Ali and his friend. Finally, an important detail, where Ali tells Baba that Amir was also there hiding when Hassan was fiercely raped, but ran.

The reason I chose a letter was because it fits perfectly with my purpose and aim, and also it fits with the time the novel is set. And the use of language in the letter is informal.

(N° of words: 162)

Written Assignment Rationale

The Kite Runner tells a story of fierce cruelty and redeeming love between Amir, a young afghan boy, and the main characters, specially Hassan, a loyal Hazara kid, friend of Amir. Both loved to fly kites, until something happens that breaks with their fondness game.

The letter that I'm going to write explain the reasons of why Amir and Hassan stoped seeing each other, just as Baba stoped seeing Ali in a specific event inside the story.

I will mention how Ali tells Baba about Hassan's rape through a emotional letter. Also, the 40 year relation reference by Ali to his friend. Finally, an important detail, where Ali tells Baba that Amir was also there hiding when Hassan was fiercely raped, but ran.

The reason I chose a letter was because it fits perfectly with my purpose and aim, and also it fits with the time the novel is set.

( Number of Words: 150 )

Written Assignment Literally Task

September 4th, 1975

Dear Baba,

I'm writing to you because Ali asked me to. I'm a friend of him, so I'm writing the letter because, as you know, he's illiterate. He wanted to write to you so much, he really wanted to explain why, after 40 years, suddenly decided to leave the house along with Hassan. So I will concede his wish.

It has been 40 years, in which we treated each other as brothers. I'll never forget that moment, me as a child, when your father finally adopted me, those years where I grew up with you Baba. Making silly things, the mischief you and I used to cause.
I know you got confused when I told you that both of us were leaving the house, because Hassan told me everything.

I'm sure you remember exactly the kite tournament, Amir cutting the last kite, Hassan said it as a bright blue one, a cool one. So when the kite started falling down, you were so happy and distracted that you didn't realized Hassan went straight away to the place where the kite were suppose to land.

So he went alone, he rant through the paths and ended in a cold alley near the bazaar, and he actually found the kite - you know Hassan never fails at it -. But his happiness lasted only a few seconds, the seconds before it happened.

Assef knew about the kite tournament, so he waited, together with Wally and Kamal, to be ended so he could talk to him about their unfinished business. But suddenly they saw a boy running alone searching for a blue kite that landed there. It was Hassan. And he remembered that he was the one pointing him with his slingshot, calling him "one-eye Assef". So when Hassan finally found the kite inside an alley, he turned back and found Assef and the other two, and they asked nicely if Hassan could let them the kite. And, for you to know, someone else was there, hiding in the corner of the alley, some you know: Amir.

So, Assef told him to give him the kite so he "would forgive him for his rudeness". But you know Hassan as much as I do,  and because of his loyalty to Amir, he denied. So he proceeded to insult my "stupid hazara boy". So Assef decided to let him keep the kite, but you know nothing is free in this world. Assef final words were "I'll let you keep the kite. I'll let you keep the kite so it will always remind you of what I'm about to do": he raped Hassan.
He raped him with no compassion. You know Amir was there, right? Well, he could just step into the alley and stand up for all those time Hasan did for him in the past, and I'm sure you think the same thing, or he could run. While Hassan was with his face towards the cold wall, and the only thing he remembers is seeing a boy coming out the alley and running alone.

It maybe be surprising for you, but the reason Amir hided his watch and the bills under Hassan's pillow was because he felt so guilty that he only wanted no longer to see Hassan again. That's why I decided to leave the house, so I ask you a favor. Don't ever think I forgot those 40 years, because I haven't done it.

I hope both of you take care.

Best wishes,

Ali.

( Number of Words: 580 )

English Book Activity page 279

Discussion dialog:

Reductant: I'm not sure of the IVF decision, because I will be holding in my arms a test tube baby and not my son.

Eager: I disagree with your point of view. The in vitro fertilisation is just a modern way to choose our child sex, in our case a boy.

Reductant: I know that the in vitro fertilisation is a chance to make sure our child is going to be a boy, but it's completely unnatural and feels wrong. You know how important the moral is for me.

Eager: You may be right, but IVF is a medical solution to our problem, and we have enough money to afford it. Just think about it, having a girl and a boy. We will be such a happy family, and we will not be dealing with girl problems that are so hard to underestand.

Reductant: Yeah, I think so. So it's decided, let's go together to have our litle boy!